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wow. I really like your story. It was so...believable, not like other stories! pm me when you post the next part. Anyways, I like Lana's attitude! She reminds me, of ...

oooh. This is awesome already! Are you Planning on writing more? I hope you are. I don't like cliff-hangers! The suspense is terrible! Keep writing.

Awwwww! That is so sweet. I'm sure he would be proud. This is an awesome poem. Keep writing. _WFL_

Whow! I love this story! Keep writing.

Okay, the flashbacks, as said in the title, are painful for her to remember. Oh, and deafwriter, have you ever heard of the R.L Stein books? Usually, in the beginning, ...

Wow. It's not bad at all. I like the question in it. Your flow was fast paced and even. Easy to read. Very good.

whoa. Keep writing please. You could make this into a novel and get It published. It's awesome!

Wow. This was really deep. I think it is poetic in it's own, unique way. I liked it. I'm gonna give you a gold star. _WFL_

*hehehe* the armpit thing, was freaking hilarious. Everyone got everything that I could see. DON"T take me off of the list thing-mo-bobber. Ever. This story is so touching, it's funny.

I agree with full force with Nolan. Your piece had something that I haven't seen in a while, good, really good, description. You are extremely talented and I will look ...

Vernon, all of my work isn't ever good enough for you, is it? Actually, I thought that compared to my other pieces that this is not a navel-gazing piece. Maybe ...

Well, Thought that this was very original and unique. I, personally, liked the 'Would you" phrase being repeted over and over again. I would be your friend, too.

Ahh! Next chapter is a must to this story! You are a quite talented writer. Did this happen to you? The use of description was awesome. I especailly like the ...

Wow. I mean, wow. I really need to read the next part. Seriously. this was awesome. Very good use of description.

Thanks everyone. I really like this poem actually. Oh, and Also thanks for not ripping it to shred, with the exception of, of course, Vernon. No offense Vernon. :roll: